It was breezy Saturday night. Winters had started and nights were colder now. Dark clouds hovered just below the sky. The earth lightens up momentarily as lightening struck the sky. After the lightening it was the time for rain to wet the surface of earth. The dogs start yapping as another lightening struck the sky.
When the rain stopped and watch clocked at 11:50, a motorbike stopped
near the junction. A man in his thirties got down and parked the bike at corner
of the road. He removed his helmet and wiped his face with a bandanna. He
slipped his hand in the pocket of his pants and pulled out a packet of
cigarette but to his dismay it was empty! He pulled the bag from his back and
checked in its pockets. He found a cigarette rolled in a paper. He unrolled the
paper, lit the cigarette and closed his eyes. It was a long and frustrating day
in the office though he had waited for this day for a long time. He had goose
bumps and couldn't sleep previous night. He was nervous and excited.
However, he knew a little that all his efforts were going into the vain and it
had left him devastated.
“Take it easy Rahul. It happens!” said Sanjay, his colleague.
“I’m not going to leave him. He will die!” screamed Rahul. He had given
his everything to the company. He had worked early mornings, late nights, on
the weekends and the least he expected was promotion.
“Come on man. This is not the end of the world.” Sanjay tried to calm
his nerves.
Normally a man with soothing and pleasant demeanor, today Rahul was bursting with anger. He
wanted to go back into the cabin of his boss and throw him out of the window.
He had been overlooked in favor of Ritesh who was coincidentally the
nephew of the company’s vice-president.
“I’m sorry man. Better luck next time.” Ritesh
winked at Rahul.
He almost smacked Ritesh into his face before being stopped Sanjay.
A bright light and a boisterous sound forced him to open his eyes. A
fast moving heavy truck was headed in his direction. The truck gained more
speed as the distance between them reduced.
He got frightened as the distance lessened further and moved back. The
driver pressed the breaks just before running over him.
“Are you crazy?” Rahul yelled. His heart was in his mouth. He was
terrified.
“Sorry! I didn't mean to scare you.” The truck driver said as
he opened the doors.
“ Didn't you see I was standing here? And why were you driving
so fast near the corner of road?” His heart was still pounding at the highest
rates.
“These are power breaks sahib and I had no intention to
run over you.” Truck driver grinned. His grin was sinister.
Rahul rubs his head with his fingers and gave the driver a threatening
look.
“What do you want?” He asked the driver.
“I saw you smoking the cigarette. My stock is over and I thought I might
borrow one from you. It’s cold.” Driver said and got down from the truck.
“That’s not the right reason to drive fast. You are driving me nuts
man.”
“Trust me that was the only reason. I smoke two full packets of
cigarettes a day.”
“I’m tired. Take the cigarette and go.” He said in a low voice and
passed his half smoked cigarette to him.
“Don’t you have any fresh stock?” The driver asked.
“This is the only one I have. Take it or give it back to me. I want it
badly too.” He got irritated by constant blabber of the truck driver.
“Don’t get angry sahib. I’ll take this and could you tell me
the way to enter the city. I’m lost I think.” He said and got inside the truck.
“Head towards east.” He replied.
“Thank you and by the way what is the time sahib?” He
asked again.
“Five minutes to twelve.” Man replied looking into his watch.
“Ok, five minutes to go.” Driver said.
“For what?”
“New year sahib. Happy New Year.” The truck
driver said and pressed the accelerator.
“Happy new year.” Rahul said in a low voice and saw the truck driver
moving the truck on the neighboring road.
Meanwhile Rahul pulled out another cigarette rolled in a paper from the
bag. He lit it and watched the actions of truck driver from the corner of the
road.
“He is going in the wrong direction again.” He thought.
However, after travelling a small distance the truck stopped and took a
u-turn and gradually increased the speed of truck. Rahul stood on the road and
watched the truck coming in swiftly on the road adjacent. He checked the time
in the clock. It was fifteen seconds to twelve. The distance between them
lessened as he watched in consternation. His hands shivered and cigarette fell
of his hand as he sweats in the cold. At the same time he heard a screeching
sound from his behind. Before he could turn a car zipped passed him. Next
moment a cacophony of sounds hit Rahul’s
ears like a tidal wave. He covered his ears with his hands as he fell on his
knees. The five ton truck moving over eighty miles an hour had crushed straight
into the passenger side of the car. The crunching of metal, the tinkling of
glass as it shattered into the car.
It took him few seconds to realize what
had happened. He quickly got up and went near the destroyed car. He saw two men
covered with blood inside the car. He broke the window and got inside to pull
them out. Next moment a shiver went down his spine. Those were the bodies of
his boss and Ritesh and on the other side laid the body of truck driver. They
were dead!
Rahul took out his mobile phone from the pocket as
it buzzed. A message!
“Happy new year. Have a great life ahead.” He read
the message. It was Sanjay.
12 comments:
I was not able to believe! Very good narration, Prasoon!
Great (read unexpected) end to the story.. kind of sad too... Nicely written
Great post......
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Sinister...loved the narration : )
Devastating end, an excellent narration done from your side buddy. I wish the end was not that blunt. :( Take care!
Nice
@ Sandhaya, Aparna and Debopam - Thank you very much :)
@ Me- thanks buddy :)
@ Tanya- Will try to write better ends for stories next time :)
@ Maya- Thanks :)
all comes round ..
Excellent story
Bikram's
@ Ashwini and Bikram - Thanks :)
excellent work as olws :)
I liked the end :D
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