Astonished "Nisha"
Her heels are making terrifying sounds as she moves swiftly. On her way
she strikes into something unknown. It is dark! She couldn’t see anything. She
stops when she hears a sound unknown. Frighten and horrify, she slowly turns
her body. Next moment; it is brightness all over again as everyone says “Happy
birthday Nisha.”
P.S. My first attempt at 55 fiction :)
12 comments:
Great work..
You inspire me to try my hand on this...
:)
I hope to try this some day :)
Thats really nice Prasoon !
I always find fiction 55 very tricky,so well I never do it :D
that is sweet! :) A woman in a dark alley and we already have horrid images!
so sweet....
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I liked it. Short, sweet and cute :) :)
Cheers,
Thank you all :) :)
Nice and cute :)
Take Care
Good one!! :)
Thank you Fatima & Shilpa :)
Cool! You did a fair job on the 55 words & the theme was nice as well. waiting more from your side. I would like a conflict please try it one in the story :D I am no good at it but it would be really interesting because you write such nice stories :)
A decent job, given that it was your maiden attempt....I reckon you should go for these again....Coz i hav realized that u get better with this genre as you write more of it...Plus, it hardly takes up your time....one can write a flash 55 in just 5.5 minutes :)))
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