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Wednesday, August 15, 2012

Astonished "NISHA"


Astonished "Nisha"
Her heels are making terrifying sounds as she moves swiftly. On her way she strikes into something unknown. It is dark! She couldn’t see anything. She stops when she hears a sound unknown. Frighten and horrify, she slowly turns her body. Next moment; it is brightness all over again as everyone says “Happy birthday Nisha.”

P.S. My first attempt at 55 fiction :) 

13 comments:

Harshita Srivastava said...

Great work..
You inspire me to try my hand on this...
:)

Divya said...

I hope to try this some day :)

Ritika said...

Thats really nice Prasoon !
I always find fiction 55 very tricky,so well I never do it :D

Kappu said...

that is sweet! :) A woman in a dark alley and we already have horrid images!

Noopur said...

so sweet....

http://apparitionofmine.blogspot.in/

Tanvi said...

I liked it. Short, sweet and cute :) :)

Cheers,

Ashwini C N said...

Ah, What a pleasant Surprise for her. Very Nice :-)

Prasoon said...

Thank you all :) :)

Fatima said...

Nice and cute :)

Take Care

Shilpa Garg said...

Good one!! :)

Prasoon said...

Thank you Fatima & Shilpa :)

Tanya Sehgal said...

Cool! You did a fair job on the 55 words & the theme was nice as well. waiting more from your side. I would like a conflict please try it one in the story :D I am no good at it but it would be really interesting because you write such nice stories :)

ritesh said...

A decent job, given that it was your maiden attempt....I reckon you should go for these again....Coz i hav realized that u get better with this genre as you write more of it...Plus, it hardly takes up your time....one can write a flash 55 in just 5.5 minutes :)))

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